Acoustic folk/rock/pop singer songwriter.
Its just me, and sometimes with Martin Tierney from Bobo on lead guitar.
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Bill Wright
Jan 29, 2008
Nice acoustic Oasis style tune, Thomas. Well done unplugged demo.
Hayley Oliver
Jan 27, 2008
Tom,
nice catchy song and great guitar, keep up the excellent work. :)
love
Hayley
LAST TRAIN BAND
Jan 23, 2008
Hi Thomas,
Its great that you've got so much helpfull feedback, much of with I agree. If I was to say one area that would make your stuff more interesting its try a bit more variety in the guitar department. I know its hard to sing and play complex backing at the same time but too many singer songwrites realy on 'stumming' the guitar to death. Keep going you've got good tunes and commitment.
Best for the horizon,
Ray Last Train Band.
bobbywayne
Jan 22, 2008
Lot's of power, and emotion in ur music. Hey, take it easy on that guitar, gotta make it last...:D
iannai
Jan 21, 2008
I appreciate your songwriting gift. Thanks for stopping by and listening to my tunes.
Dave Hanshaw
Jan 20, 2008
Hello Thomas! thanks for inviting me by! I have really enjoyed listening to your songs very much! this is a great song to and you have done a great job! 5 stars says it all! i have added this one to my station as well! keep on making great music! have a great week ahead! write On! Kep in touch! peace & love bro! Dave
Kurt Lewis Neufer
Jan 20, 2008
Hello Thomas,
Thank you for stopping by.
You have a great song hear and great singing voice.....like you guitar style too....as far a production, you have to go with what you have.....keep up the great work..:)
Have a wonderful weekend,
Kurt
Michael Duran
Jan 19, 2008
Hello Thomas :)
I finally got by to give this a listen.
I see that a lot of good advice has come your way,
so I won't repete the obvious ..
What I do hear is PASSION in the way you hit the strings, in the way way you reach for vocal highs, and in your lyrics.
Passion is a tricky thing to get under control, and aimed at the audience, instead of your instument .. You'll soon learn, you have the heart, give it time and patience!
Michael
Paul Mcilwaine
Jan 19, 2008
Hi Thomas
Very cool song with great potential my friend - You need to re-record in a studio environment - there are plenty of home packages available - I started out using a Magix programme I bought for £20 - a free programme that a lot of folks use is http://audacity.sourceforge.net/. Have a go with this it will make a big difference to the quality.
Peace
Paul Mcilwaine
Alex Cooper
Jan 17, 2008
nice job man. Reminds me of a bowie demo song I heard.
BlueTurbit
Jan 17, 2008
Nice song Thomas.
I agree with most here about the recording quality, but you do with what you have on hand, I suppose. The guitar is too harsh and tinny sounding - recording needs more bass. To me some words were hard to understand in some places, but overall a good performance IMO, and good song.
Keep on making music. Remember, the next song is always the best one. grin
Ken Trusler
Jan 16, 2008
Nice tune. I would love to hear a studio version of this tune. Check around the net for a free studio to download and play with it. But overall I enjoyed it.
Bob Forbes
Jan 15, 2008
Nice acoustic melody and original vocals - would definitely spend some $$ on better recording equipment to assist in bringing out your sound to the fullest. Enjoyable listening!
Cheers, Bob / RedEyeC
barny
Jan 15, 2008
hello Thomas ..i think the song sounds good...the vocals great..but the production lets it down a little ....but thats nothing to worry about...you dont need talent for that..what you have got is good ideas and good songwriting skills ..the rest can be corrected very easily..:)
paul
ALEXIS PATRICK
Jan 15, 2008
Beautiful work Thomas!!!!!!!! You have a great style of singing...and you're an excellent guitarist,,,You should come to the U.S.A. for music business. I rate you all the stars because you deserve it!!!!!!!!
Many Sweet Blessings,
Lekzee
Sagacious Hag
Jan 15, 2008
Hello Thomas,
How do you feel about this song? I think it's nice but the recording technique needs to be refined. It sounds like you are in a room with wood floors. Is that right? Do a little research on mic placement. That has been my problem. Experiment with the mic. Stand about 3 feet from the mic and point it to the lower right of the sound hole and test your levels. With the vocs about 1 foot. Try that man....
Let me know if any of this works.
Peace,
Greg
VMP (USA)
Jan 14, 2008
This is a well crafted song. Your melodies, phrasing, playing, vocals, and lyrics combine nicely. I envision a final cut with your guitar and voice sounding sweeter and richer, your singing and playing are nice but will be greatly enhanced as your production value improves. Other than that rectifiable issue you are a singer-songwriter to be reckoned with, great job!
Morten Gjermundsen
Jan 14, 2008
Thanks a lot for your visit!
this sounds pretty good.I think you´re hitting the strings a little too hard.Other from that great work!
Kevin Rosenberger
Jan 12, 2008
Nice song Thomas - keep it coming.
I'd like to hear this recorded in the studio. Otherwise buy a copy of Cubase, Logic and/or ProTools. Light versions do exist for most programs like Sonar or Cubase. You can buy a cheap sound card from M-Audio or Behringer. Check out Energy XT. I'd do both an unplugged & an electric version of this song. Be blessed.