Im Just a Young Artist Doing What I Love, I Make What I Feel Thats What Makes Me Diffrent Than Most
I Go by Semi Moto I Love to Rap Been Doing It For A Few Years Now And Im Just Starting To Get Serious Im Always Down To Collab So Hit Me Up For a Hott 16 Free Of Charge!!!!
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FhyreMann Productions
Aug 05, 2010
Hook was pretty nice...There weren't too many punchlines but it was aight for a first diss track...Keep doin yuh thing Semi...
Don Coda
Jul 20, 2010
I like the diss!! Good job bro!
JC The Truth (NJ)
Jul 19, 2010
Thanks a lot for the love and feedback on Take Your Last Breath. I appreciate that dude. Glad you were feeling it.
Now about the diss...
Damn it took all three of ya'll to come at this dude? Ya'll trying to retire him early then sh** . Lol. Nah, but... I'm not big into diss tracks, but it was Ok man. No one really brought any really memorable punchlines... but I gotta say you had a few in the beginning of your verse that were pretty good though. I know you said it was your 1st diss track. And it's a shame because the beef and hate is uncalled for from anyone, but I guess you have to do what you think is right. I'd keep working on mixing and production though. You're getting there!
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Pharaoh aka Pyro Techniquez
Jul 18, 2010
Tight track fam. needs a little more mixing & mastering, but overall its definately a banger. keep it coming. 1 peace.
Shamba Menelek - Lyrical Great
Jul 18, 2010
Pretty Much what Pimp said. That hook is catchy.. It just sounded hot.. I didnt even know what he said but it sounded hot. lol. Oh and that beat is crazy Cot damn.
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Bombsquad TBS
Jul 17, 2010
Good song man. Thanks for the feed. I like this just needs some work with the recording in my opinion
CHRONICLY CHALLENGED RECORDS
Jul 16, 2010
YO NICE TRACK, THE HOOK WAS SICK, FIRST VERSE WAS TIGHT, 2ND VERSE WAS A LIL OFF FOR ME N UR VERSE WAS TIGHT COULD OF FLOWED A LIL SMOOTHER IN UR CONNECTING WORDS BUT IT WAS PRETTY TIGHT BRO. HOLLA AT ME WHEN U GET THEM COLABS DONE UP BRUH. ALSO ME MANIK N OUR NEW ARTIST INFAMOUS HAVE A NEW TRACK UP ON DA PAGE IF U GOT A MIN. PEACE OUT 100
B-MIZE
Jul 15, 2010
Thanks man for the positive comment, and glad you'll have that mix for me to sort out!.
This track is crazy bro, all 3 of you put in the work and in the end the track came off great!. The hook fits perfectly but i have to agree with pimpg, i couldn't make out what he was saying (still sounds sick though lol). All 3 verses are tight and the track in general has real potential to be a club banger!. Keep up the great work bro, peace!!1
B-Mize
Jerry Vicious
Jul 14, 2010
I really like that beat...the hook would be pretty good if the quality was a lil better...I couldnt really catch it all....The verses were pretty good and direct str8 to the point..The verse the flow was nice, the second verse there wasnt much emotion for a diss tracks...the lyrics were there, just not the delivery...and your verse....you came off real good man...lyrically you did the damn thang...only thing I would say is work on that quality....this really has the potential to be a dangerous ass song
Youl Semi man you going hard on this g sh** now bro...member wen i said you gota put more oompha in2 it...you have homie defently upped ya game homie This hooks mean 2