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I wrote this song with something particular in mind but I want the listener to relate to it in their own way. If it reminds them of their ex, drug addiction, father, etc, then that is what it's about to them. I was just a little pissed, can you tell?
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Just a poetry geek that happens to also like rapping.
Hello. I am simply a beaner that likes to rap. I wouldn't even call myself a rapper per se, I'm a writer. However, ever since I heard "Hard Knock Life" by Jay-Z when I was 5, I fell in love with hip-hop. I could tell you many things, hype myself up to make me look like a star...but I will let the music speak for itself. I could tell you a bunch of stuff about my tracks but...just shut up and listen, shut up and listen son.
Song Info
Genre
Hip-Hop • Hardcore Rap
Charts
#7,086 in subgenre Peak #59
Charts
Peak #442
Author
Jose A. Ortega
Rights
Jose A. Ortega 2010
Uploaded
June 14, 2010
Track Files
MP3
MP3 3.3 MB • 128 kbps • 3:34
Lyrics
1st Verse: Most of this garbage that I write That these people seem to like Is about you, but that should Be easy to realize What exactly gave you the right To stray into my life and Change it overnight? You soured my appetite Now everyday is A constant fight cuz you Took away my very will to Remain alive You f*** ed up my life and Took away every little thing That was nice I want happines, but what will Be the prize? What else can I sacrifice?! You took away my smiles and Replaced them with tears Streaming down my eyes You took away happiness And replaced it with drama and strife Thanks to YOU, I'm now Cold as ice You kicked me from the heights Into tunnel with no light And no end in sight Took away my happy days and Replaced them with Sleepless nights So...hell no I'm not alright. Chorus: (FUCK OFF) I don't need you in my life You caught me in a vice But I'm not giving up without a fight (FUCK OFF) I wish that you Would just go away Cuz you got me wondering why I even Wake up like Every single day (FUCK OFF) Yeah, f*** you very much You left me crushed With your very touch (FUCK OFF) I don't need you in my life You caught me in a vice But I'm not Giving up without a fight 2nd Verse: You took away my sunshine And replaced it with rain Thanks to you, all I know is pain And I will never again be the same Now I won't say any names But YOU are the one to blame I feel so strange Damn near insane Why won't you just leave me alone? Why won't you just let me be? Thanks to you I no longer feel free And darkness is all I see An outcast of this society I used to be such a nice man But now I'm just a huge prick You make me feel Like a worthless piece of sh** And I'm sick of it You crushed my dream Lowered my self esteem I try to find happiness but you Always intervene Why won't you go away from my mind and f*** off? I try my best to keep on keeping on But my best was never enough. Chorus 3rd Verse: I'm lost in dark thoughts You poisoned my mind I even think about suicide Sometimes You infected my rhymes You got me writing all these sad songs You left me confused, I don't know what's going on Keep on testing me and I'm not all that strong I'm tired of this Hell that You put me through Crept out of nowhere and made me feel blue I don't know what to do I wish to be left alone You got me feeling unsafe In my own home I bet you like it when I get sad And when I break down you get glad You see me miserable and just laugh I bet that you love to see me cry I've watched the stars illuminate the sky And for every dot of light That was a tear streaming down my eye Chorus.
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Tyler B
Oct 12, 2010
I like it man. But like the other people commenting said, it sounds like you were definitely tryin to fit a few to many words in some of your lines. Don't stop though man. I can definitely feel your passion and i can appreciate the drive that you have. Nice track man.
Imani VMR
Sep 24, 2010
ay Capo Let me Find out u Steppin it up .....u definately show vast improvement ....I've been on some otha sh** lately busy as hell I'ma get back on the music thing real soon ....I do have a few tracks u haven't commented on I would like for u ta come thru and Peep the top two joints on my page for me .....Take ya time and Lean on me ....get at me --1--
Jiri Hajek - composer
Jul 17, 2010
Hmm, this sounds really good, lovely pice, you are better and better, my friend!! Jiri
FhyreMann Productions
Jul 11, 2010
Yeah u sound a lil pissed off lol...Keep workin on tha delivery tho...Sound like u were try'na fit too much in some lines...Otha than that...Very nice...Check out tha new few beats wheneva u got some time n keep me posted on yuh new music...
3fecta
Jun 18, 2010
Yeah cosigning. The flow is getting much better! The delivery is excellent. And yeah someone is pissed off lol
Kid Low Key
Jun 17, 2010
sh** fam i just waz able to get hear to listin and s.c. is sayin its not available to listin??? i will try again ina bit but when you can slide by i got a new one posted for my wife wit pimp G singin on the hooks we also have another one comin wit the same concept in a few days that is raw lemme know ya feelins its called "wanna know" holla soon fam i will keep tryin to peep ya knew one till it lets me 1000000000
Jerry Vicious
Jun 16, 2010
This one is real nice Capo...that beat is hot...and you are def. working on the flow...I can completely hear it....thats the thing I like about you man....over the years...you havent take the advice and criticism to heart...you took it and you learned from it....this is by far one of your best tracks....the only thing I would say to you now, and I could be wrong..sometimes it sounds like you do your hooks every time...if you paying for studio...do your hook once..at the beginning and tell them to copy and paste it throughout the track so it would all sound perfectly uniform....other than that man...this sh** is real real hot! I bumped it 3 times in a row!
B-MIZE
Jun 15, 2010
Thanks for the feedback bro, as always you know i appreciate it. Now, down to this track, i always give honest feedback bro, you know me by now. So, first of all the beat is crazy, real hype. For the first time ever in one of your tracks, you are spot on hitting your syllables on cue with the beat. Maybe a tiny bit off here and there, but like i always say capo, i can feel your passion when you deliver and that's what makes me listen to each and every song you produce. So my advise would be keep doing what you're doing, but just try a tad bit harder to keep hitting those notes on cue!. Other than that man, this track is by far the best song you've recorded to far. And for sure capo many people will relate to this. Keep up the great work - Peace!!1 B-Mize
Semimoto
Jun 14, 2010
Yo Capo You Inspire Me On the Real You Got A Lotta Heart And I Respect That! Your Flow Is Nice On Here Lyrics Were Nice To Man Overal Best Song I Heard By You Yet
Da Artizt
Jun 14, 2010
Pretty Good homie... just try to be more clear when you speak but other than that its good Artizt 714! West Coast!
Amp dott
Jun 14, 2010
you got another hot one here, im feelin the topic alot, i realy like your style, your flow gets better everytime you have a new track up, were you been gettin them hot beats from? :)