Rough recording, more energy
I need feedback on this song. I have been dating this girl for the last month, & I want to send her this song. Need to know if it's crap or not, & if I should or should not send it to her.
Story behind the song
I hadn't written a song in 3 or 4 years, until recently when I started going out with this great girl & this came out. I want it to work & am trying, but things are complicated however, age, distance, etc & I know she has reservations.
Lyrics
I'd been stuck in a rut so long, I don't know
Then you found your way into my life Nicole
Although I don't know, where this can go
I think it's owed, to both of us, we just got to trust
And I can't get you off my mind for anything
And not just because you're one of the most beutiful things I've seen
You've got a beutiful heart, I've seen it right from the start.
All these things, We can not change
who knows,who knows
Still I think, we should try,
Who knows , we might just defy
if we try to be something
if we try to be something
if we try to be something
I don't know
Nicole, but
Theres a lot of time & distance
there's going to be resistance
still I want to give it a go
All these things, We can not change
who knows,who knows
Still I think, we should try,
Who knows , we might just defy
if we try to be something
if we try to be something
you & I can be something
if we try, to be something
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