simple song writing demos, country
No band these days... just a writer recording my own demo's.
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Frankfurt Dialog Company
Oct 14, 2008
Hi Dawn, how very, well, as the title says, beautiful. Great piano, wonderful voice, outstanding lyrics!
This is a ***** and if I could a ****************** song!
Many thanks!
Andreas
Butch Peck
Aug 30, 2008
Hello Dawn,
Beautiful song, the vocal is very strong. you ahve a sweet voice. Good job! Keep the music coming.
Peace be with you
Hayley Oliver
Jun 06, 2008
An absolutely "beautiful" song!
Love
Hayley
Robert Muscovitz
May 27, 2008
To My Dear Friend Dawn,
This song is beautiful... very touching lyrics with a subtle but sweet melody.. I have to say that you're wearing your heart on your sleeve my friend. It shows in every image you project within the two songs you posted. I hurt for you and feel much empathy towards what you're feeling.
Can't say why,, just do! Though your songs are wonderfully done and fantastically written,, I sense a deep yet passionate feeling of sadness within you just by what I've heard. You deserve a sunny summer day to embrace
a smile for just yourself... You are a wonderful person my friend...And again I say,, very very tallented!!
BOB
There's something about a sad song that tugs at the heart more than anything else, and this song reminded me of that. When listening to the melody and reading along with the lyrics in front of me, I was surprised by the second verse, but life is always full of surprises, so the song felt very real to me. Very sad but growing sweeter at the end with the child born and the words said again. Very strong penning.