simple song writing demos, country
No band these days... just a writer recording my own demo's.
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Hayley Oliver
Jun 06, 2008
Another lovely song, a sad story well written and sung. more stars! :)
Love
Hayley
Robert Muscovitz
May 27, 2008
Dear Dawn,
I'm so glad to finally hear from you and that you're OK.
I really do miss those folks, like yourself, when you're off and busy with lifes journey. You could say that I truly enjoy the person you are within though we've never met before and probably never will. I'm just one of those who care about my friends and all that they're going through.
As for the song,,, BEAUTIFUL! As if you lived the lyrics in my mind.. Melody and structure is excellent and you sing it superbly. I always did enjoy your voice...The song is simply lovely... a reflection of a heartbroken woman that needs to be shared.
Please don't be shy or a stranger Dawn.. Keep me posted! You are one of my very favorite writers and friends here at the Click.. Very very tallented...
Your Friend,
BOB
This is really well-written, and I like how the last line of every verse continued to change little by little to tell the complete story. The locket being heavy in your hand was a great line as it brought that "sinking heart" feeling that most have been familiar with at some point or another. Great writing...very pretty melody, as well, especially in the bridge. Vocals sound great, as always.