Heyy everyone.
I just started writtin songs.
I know i got a ways before i get extremely good. but im a beginner soo give me some slack. I rap on my own. I haven't tried rappin with sumone else. i might try that later on down the road.
tell me what yea think . i just want peoples opinons on my music.
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emmamess
May 07, 2008
alright girl spit that shyt - now ya spittin - just wish ya track waz clearer - can't hear vocals too well - but i kno you was FEELIN IT when ya spit it! I rated tha vocals -n- lyrics 3 cuz of tha quality of tha recording - not tha content!
Shortiiee this song has potential and so do u!!! I like the whisperin in tha beginin, plus I can hear/feel ur pain thru tha lyrics and thatz real. Word u did pretty good writin this song, u even threw a bridge in there, thaswussup. The beatz kool too. I think this song is very good for wat itz worth at the time, considerin the fact that this was more about a healthy release to u than an attempt to broadcast ur talent. I suggest u keep at this one and get it solid(5-star), ud be surprised how many people would like it. Touch up ur lyrics a little, focus on ur delivery(pronunciation and clarity) and flow(syllables and word patterns/words per bar), u already got emotion pourin out so u good on that, also try dubbin ur lyrics, maybe toss in adlibs 2. If u take this serious and work at rap u could really make rap work 4 u...believe that!!! Good luck, holla at me wen u put new trax up aite.