Downtempo pop, Very Rough Cut, needs a chorus, a bridge, beginning, end, reinstrumentation-- yet it has golden potential i think!!
new songwriter downtempo
whenever you're confused and
you run into a block
you open up your mouth and
just begin to talk
you speak and yet your point is
very hard to find
when everything is bolded
nothing jumps to mind
the words are getting blurred and
the message getting lost
is barely now percieved and
no one sees the cost
and every new decision
at each moment in time
is further from the goal
one might as well just mime
try hard but in the end its
not all that bizzarre
to ask yourself a question
and not get very far
the logic runs in circles
and questions undefined
are lurking in the shadows
the old answers unwind
