The production is good. I like the beats but you need to push your vocals. You could try singing it differently, using effects like a vocoder, compression or if you can it afford Auto Tune.
I'm uncertain if you are using a DAW such as Sonar, Cubase or Logic. They have great tools to maximize your vocals. This is only my opinion but you can improve.
Rapping the song might be another positive solution you might want to consider. I'd suggest you come up with a title. The world is full of thieves you might want a better working title.
The production is good. I like the beats but you need to push your vocals. You could try singing it differently, using effects like a vocoder, compression or if you can it afford Auto Tune. I'm uncertain if you are using a DAW such as Sonar, Cubase or Logic. They have great tools to maximize your vocals. This is only my opinion but you can improve. Rapping the song might be another positive solution you might want to consider. I'd suggest you come up with a title. The world is full of thieves you might want a better working title.