criminologistrr

I would like to suggest that you refrain from using the "n word or n*** ." This could possibly create hardship for you since you are white. There are more people of colour who use the word, " n*** ." The full n word was adopted by people of colour to denote friendship or otherwise when white people use it is considered offensive. Depending on the person[s] of colour could create problems you don't want nor need. It could be one reason you have neither fans nor friends on your page. cccc What you must understand is that record labels, producers & others in the entertainment industry look at websites such as Soundclick, soundcloud.com, virb.com & Myspace for new artists. Don't make a bad impression.cccc Why limit your ability to get a label, a collaboration or a job in the industry. Even if you don't have perfect vocals your beat making capabilities are nothing to scoff at. Please take a moment & think about what I'm saying. Have a blessed day.

The production is good. I like the beats but you need to push your vocals. You could try singing it differently, using effects like a vocoder, compression or if you can it afford Auto Tune. I'm uncertain if you are using a DAW such as Sonar, Cubase or Logic. They have great tools to maximize your vocals. This is only my opinion but you can improve. Rapping the song might be another positive solution you might want to consider. I'd suggest you come up with a title. The world is full of thieves you might want a better working title.