Hey yall, I need critiquing on my upcoming mixtape. If you down to help, hit me up in my DM. Thank you in advance.

Hi everyone, I have new music on myspace just check me out there, soon i'll have more here.....I also have beats if your interested, Holla

{VERSE1} Imagine me with a chopper digging in that meat Bullets through the soul and the blood leak Listen to the truth speak bitch Give me every stack you got I’m not worried about a piggy bank I’m talkin shoe box (gimmie what you got) I don’t understand why ya’ll rappers talk shit Just give me yo income and beef on a dick Man I am a hit I don’t need a beat I smoke every second you can’t get higher than me You can’t be flyer than me far as the eye can’t see I blind all those bitches yeah they burn by z I’m not afraid I’ll stampede yo house My fists is like hollow tips They’ll rampage yo mouth {{{What you talkin bout}}} You know what I mean Getting stacks is my mission Give me what I need I ain’t playin wit cha and I won’t hesitate Open that shoe box before my goonz raid the place Shit it’s too late You gon need a trainer Cuz one of my patnaz put yo brain in a container Didn’t even shoot cha but yo face look shot I was just watching I cannot lie that shit was hot BLOT BLOT