... Yes I know! That these songs, and put it on www.soundclick.com / joaocardoso there are probolems the following: Lack of knowledge in construction of soil, or say that before laziness! Poor choice of notes Vibrato poor Inconsistent phrasing Lack of practice with metronome Melody out of tune Technical poorly implemented Drum out of time , big problem ... rhythmic ... the thing does not sound .... It seems that everything is out of place ... Confusing structure and without apparent connection Tuneless guitar etc ... But the idea was not ready to make music, all these are ideas or statements of ideas, riffs melodies, etc. for future songs. That will have a completely different purpose. Only what was recorded for me not forget to certain ideas, and did everything to hurry because this is necessary to devote much time that sometimes I do not have. And put the instrumental music, because my voice is terrible. Not a musical satire of gender presented by guitar Heros ... Instrumental rock Satriani / Vai, of course, that influenced me, but with another purpose.