Atom Alexander
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callic
Apr 05, 2004
I really enjoyed the guitar riff in the song "Ghost." You remind me of Ween, kind of. I'll continue to check out your band and If you want, check out my band.
shimmerjohnson
Dec 18, 2003
Structure of your song is a bit hmmm not sure... a bit out... but great lyrics. You put emotion into your stuff that bears your soul.. which is good thats what people want to hear. I do the same in my music. If u have some time take a listen to a few of my tunes.. feel free to review it as well.
Anyway talk to you soon. And have yourself a Merry Christmas.
Jenae
www.jenaeonline.net/
DJJ-AMS
Oct 19, 2003
Hello Atom, (Bret Diaz?)
Listened to the song a few times and LOVE the feel of the chord structure. Really lays a somber mood on you within the first few seconds of play.
Not sure if you want an actual "review" of the song, usually when there is an in-depth review necessary to put the point(s) across I prefer to give them personally rather than on a public board. So for here I will say that this song has promise as far as the musical ability to create a mood very effectively. I read the lyrics and found that they are indeed very emotional, though they might benefit from a more standardized approach to structure IF you wish for a commercially viable composition.
If you wish a more detailed review, along with some personal "tips" that I have used when in the throws of creation, email me at DavidVK@vankleeck.com and I will reply with whatever you request.
Thanks for your continued support of Cross Town and our music! Maybe you'll take a chance and place an order with us for the curren
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