Dude, "Self Deception.." is awesome! It had that... I don't know, sing-along-able element where you just want to sing-a-long with the chorus. As a songwriter myself, I think it's structure is about as good as you can get. A pointer: your singing is the thing that needs improvement. You need to sing out, not so low. But that song worked out nicely. Feel free to write back. I'll have to check out you're other songs some time.
Rock on.
Dude, "Self Deception.." is awesome! It had that... I don't know, sing-along-able element where you just want to sing-a-long with the chorus. As a songwriter myself, I think it's structure is about as good as you can get. A pointer: your singing is the thing that needs improvement. You need to sing out, not so low. But that song worked out nicely. Feel free to write back. I'll have to check out you're other songs some time. Rock on.