Afterbirth

"The Silence is Screaming" -I had to vote this a flop. I'm sorry but the singing just makes it so I don't want to listen to this song. It's a shame because I honestly think the song has potential. I even think you guys sound skilled, it's just everything wasn't playing together. A lot of times I felt like the lyrics weren't flowing, and sometimes it seemed like he was just making up the next thing he was gonna sing, like on 1 of the times he did the woahs. Anyways I hope this criticism helps.

This song had a decent riff to it. I liked it, but as you probably know, it could have been better (but I won't say how). I think the singing was interesting, I mean the sing-speaking (or whatever you want to call it) was kinda cool but there was some parts that just sounded bad. Overall, it's an alright song, but the cussing was just unnecessary. I'll leave it at that.