Hi, Someone forwarded me your message over on Ourstage with the link to your song "Where Did They Go", so I came over here to check it out. First off, I´m very sorry to here that your sister is missing. That´s very sad. 
I like the tune. You did a pretty good job on it. My only criticisms would be;
1. Too much compression on the song, especially on the drums. This song shouldn´t sound so hard and loud. 
A little less compression will make it warmer sounding. 
2. You did a good job on the vocals, but there are a few places that need tightening up, that you could correct with Auto Tune, or by singing them over again. 
Anyway, good luck with the song and the video. 
Happy Holidays. 

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DICARLO

New song uploaded ...Please check it out and tell me what you think.  
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=872359

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=872359&content=music
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=872359&content=songinfo&songID=7142898

Thank you 

chukkie

This is the best recording to date that I have heard on soundclick far above all others I have heard to date, totaly pro you will be heard of soon with the rich music, great mix and great songs. blessings

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September 10, 2008

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