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DEADWATER MONK
Sep 19, 2009
Coooool concept!!!
I like the lyrics,you have a talented lyricist inside you
Do you write the words first and the music second or the opposite?Just wondering,it seems your music is very straight forward and repetative,which is good,but it seems like you take two separate things and try to make them match and somtimes,again with the sylables( i cant spell worth a flip lol)but I have done this many times before and the trick is to be flexable with one or the other,in other words,if I record the music first,then I have to take the lyrics and change them to fit the music or vice versa but i have found it easier to change lyrics than the music.and you dont have to change the idea or sentence(verse) but learn to word the sentence a bit differently
For example:
you' ve got
Contractors are getting rich (7 sylables)
Deployed for the third time,what a bit^^(9 sylables)
I suggest(right along with the melody)
The con trac tors gett ing rich
strum strum
Si BASTARDA...
Jul 29, 2009
awesommmmmeeee:d
Morten Gjermundsen
Jul 27, 2009
Nice tune.This music style is really cool.
Great work on the instruments and vocals. :)
ALEXIS PATRICK
Jul 23, 2009
Awesome vocals and music...You make me smile!!!!!!!
Electric Shadow
Jul 01, 2009
Excellent concept in writing and ohhh soooo true. Superb melody and musical production. Peace
~ES~
Carlo D'Anna
Jul 01, 2009
Very creative and I get your style! Something about this is early 70's to me. Fantastic!
Bob Forbes
Jul 01, 2009
Feels like it's burning right now in SW New Mexico (hot summers) ; ^)) Agree with previous posters - excellent written lyrics - in truth about our society. Cheers, Bob
VMP (USA)
Jul 01, 2009
Brilliant lyrics. Such a super-cool delivery, memorable melodies, a retro punk era sound and feel, back when music meant everything, fantastic!
Rick Gross
Jun 09, 2009
Cool Neil Young sound with very progressive style!! Clear vocals, well mixed and straight forward rockin' song!!
Tony DeLecce
Jun 03, 2009
Great Lyrics! Sounds like you know of what you speak.
Ken Sacco
May 30, 2009
Cool tune
murphy l henderson jr
May 16, 2009
Very nicely done!:)
God Bless..."Murphy"
Hayley Oliver
Apr 25, 2009
this is very nicely done, great work!
Love
Hayley
Frankfurt Dialog Company
Apr 24, 2009
You rock!
I really like the lyrics a lot!
The whole layout fits 100%
Many thanks for sharing!
Andreas
kaufi
Apr 21, 2009
very good lyric and i think, it is a nice piece of music, like it....
hugs, kaufi
Swampman And The Machine
Apr 21, 2009
Cool tune cuz keep rocking !!!
Very original performance, prima record!! Jiri