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Unfinished Song 38 Vocal Demo
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This is a singing in the shower version of my unfinished Song #38 All Night. The lyrics are not finished and the music is not started.
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Elisha Zaporelostzi's first performances were the Open Stages put on by the Bytown Live in Ottawa Ontario, Canada. It is how Neil Young and Joni Mitchell started. Phreap magazine is a one page thing that went around Ottawa in the 1980s. Now it is a web site; http://home.att.ne.jp/blue/patchan With the help of Joe-Charly Smith, Molly Ding, Calhoon-Fred Febealie, and Butter Jones I was able to put out Phreap magazine.
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Alternative • Alternative
Author
Patrick T. Connolly
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Patrick T. Connolly
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June 23, 2006
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MP3 1.8 MB • 128 kbps • 1:17
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This song is my Unfinished Song #38 and the working title is - All Night - This is a singing in the shower version of it. The lyrics are not finished and the music is not started. I sing a melody which was sort of my original idea of it but that can change and it does not have to be an Elvis type song. It is three verses but has no chorus. The hook line is what the song rests on and this song needs a good one to make it into a tighter nit story. The 3 verses all go; 8 syllables - A, 8 syllables - (B) - B, 6 syllables - C, 6 syllables - C, 8 syllables - A, 8 syllables - D, 6 syllables - D, I was thinking someone may be interested in finishing it since it seems some people are looking to write new songs. My Song #38 is sort of an Elvis thing and very different from - For Tomorrow's Past - which very different from my - Closet People - my song on Project Overseer Productions. Dates of Composition; Typed June 25, 1996. Edited April 7, 2001 (Last line July 2 200? June 15, 2006.)
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All Night long doing Rock & Roll, I haven’t got a clue what you do. We can’t make it home, And I can’t leave it alone. I never thought it would be your goal, To be dealing from the bottom, Just to say you got 'em. [This song needs a chorus here.] All along we have been just pasting through. Now we stumble an fumble, How we let the night go, And just put on a show. We save but we save what’s past due. And turn the watch away, And leave it for another day. [This song needs a chorus here.] There is this love cooking with you. Two loves can't, in the sun, last as one. Can't spread our love forever, And hope to keep together. We save but we save what’s past due. Being joined is being all alone. I just talk to a stone.
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