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grimey41680
Jul 31, 2006
hott sh*** fire keep it up hope to hear more son holla atcha boy 1
nesbeat
Jun 10, 2003
I just found this great song I think you should really check this one out! It's called 'Roll it up by 7thSign Music.
Here's where you can find it:
Band page: http://www.soundclick.com/7thsignmusic
ShadowProductions
Jun 07, 2003
For a supposely half something not bad, it's better and the feeling in your voice is getting there, however it sounded like you were reading it rather than rapping it.
The first verse you can tell easier
WHen the beat changed up the flow got better, but you rushed your words
Your flow is there in terms of the content, but you have to sound like your rapping and make it seem natural, I can't teach that, no one can, it comes with practice.
The beat and you are not in insync, listen to the beat it will tell how to rip it.
The good points, more feeling and the flows in terms of rhymes are good
However you need to emphazize your words make them stand out, you say every word the same
If you wanna peep an example peep Freedom again, and watch, I say certain words different from others, I don't just rap I point out what I'm saying
I can battle rap too, not my thang
but peep the other song
Second Edition Murder that's a battle verse of mine, and watch the change u
ShadowProductions
Jun 03, 2003
Thanks for the feedback as well, well if you wanna keep in touch the aol aim is asegura23, btw you can put more feeling without having to loose breath, you change your tone, manupulating your voice, listen to EM or DMX they do it all the time, it's one of the tricks of rap, once you get that you're flow will be smooth
Peace
ShadowProductions
Jun 02, 2003
The rhyming scheme is tight, however the feeling in your voice is lacking, imagine rippiing this with emotion, it'd be sick, overall I like, not only that I know you meant to keep it short
Props
If you'd like peep my flows
Peace
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