Tommy G
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3
kaybee322
Jul 20, 2004
Tommy,
Thank you for the wonderfully crafted compliment on my message board. Let's see how I can encourage and compliment you :
The strumming on the guitar *do* sound good. I'm hearing you get stuck vocally on a couple of words, like 'girl' 'world' 'your' and 'father'. Sounds like a typical 'r' phonation difficulty -- something I struggled with considerably in my cover as well. :)
The staccato section in verse 2 (guitar) is really solid. Vocally I can hear a lot of heart in your singing. I think you could sing forward a bit more and use more projection.
Oh, "warmth from a woman's heart" made me MELT..... Way to apply ritards dude!
Thanks for checking me out! Let's continue to support each other -- i look forward to hearing what you do in the future!
http://www.soundclick.com/kimberlyleister
vintagething
Jul 20, 2004
Hey man, saw your problem on MSM and decided to pop on over for a look.
Definately like the guitar. Sounds spot on - no mistakes.
The voice, not bad. The song sounds like it might be a little to low for you (again, I'm listening in crappy lowfi *stupid dial up* so part of it is probably my computer) One thing I suggest is maybe bringing your voice up a step if you can. I do it all the time for the deep baritone songs John does.
All in all, great rendition. I LOVE this song. I also recommend that you listen Kimberly Leisters cover. She's on here too. She does a pretty sweet cover herself.
Great job can't wait to hear more :)
not bad Tommy. now go and write your own song cheers!