Starfaded
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15
pauly1
May 01, 2006
Hi
listening to paper heart, because you said it was crappy!? and enjoying it.
Great words and feeling in the song
I wouldnt mind some feedback if you have time
Nice one
Paul
jeffrey mike
Oct 14, 2005
forgotton sundays
sup!
i like a lot of your riffs and you have a great cool voice...i was wondering, are you jamming a uke on forgotten sundays?
i slipped over here from color blue's mess. board just fyi...alohas
marty helly
Oct 04, 2005
Sheena -
The recordings getting better. I think you have some good themes going and some good lyrical ideas, but are trying to get too much out of single themes and A-A-A structures. To me your songs are crying for some bridge and chorus changes to carry them forward.
rey varela
Sep 30, 2005
I added you to my station too.....
rey varela
Sep 30, 2005
The sound quaility is better on the new recordings and I especially liked "Forgotten Sundays"
Peace
homesteadpa
Sep 25, 2005
THIS IS KILLA K FROM PITTSBURGH I LIKE UR VOICE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
RCV
Jul 22, 2005
Sheena,
The notebook promise, wow, what can I say, I love this kind of song...one that cries out in a subtle way. The lyrics fit the arrangemnet perfectly and your vocal delivery is perfectly understated, alot can be said in subtleness. This is such sad song and as Marty, you can say something in the outtro that would just bring it home that would add some dynamics to the song. But I truely love it the way it is, powerful and understated!
marty helly
Jul 18, 2005
"But yet it's all you wish for. "
This doesn't hit hard enough in the end line. If you can get that across, you'll have a great song here.
marty helly
Jul 13, 2005
Classical Cinematic Complexity - hard to say that let alone type it. Good pickin though.
Scratch version of Songwriter Blues posted on my page. Going to clean this up and polish it over the next week or two. Comments appreciated.
HEADSTONE
Jul 13, 2005
good job
starfaded
Jul 11, 2005
Thanks, man. I appreciate it.
RCV
Jul 11, 2005
Sheena,
Me again......
Classical Cinematic Complexity
Very nice fingerstyle....keep on!
Rey
RCV
Jun 22, 2005
Hey Sheena,
i'm not listening to the sound quality but rather the songwriting and from what I can hear you have alot of potential for making some great music. What matters is that you are writing songs and putting them out there for people to hear weather it be here or live for some friends...follow your heart!
Michelle Branch is a great role model to have!
Keep singing and playing........
You could get some tips on home recording on a budget at my board.
urx2005
Jun 13, 2005
Well, I can tell youb have a good voice and u seem to know how to play guitar. If I were you I would invest a little money (about 200$) and get some recording gear. Not that many people will sit through these song the way they are....Lots of noise. I think you have talent but you need to get better recordings of your music...if u need advice on what to get, email me bry4stl@yahoo.com
and check out my page :)
Sunken Reverie is a nice song, love the lyrics, just dail those vocals in a wee bit more but you already know that. I have a new one at the top of my page you might be interested in at the top of my music page if you have a moment to check it out. Take care