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BOLLOCKS!The Strings of Orion- Well the startin was a little slow for may taste but when it got into the beat it stated to move me. This song is more ambient trance, which is pretty cool.The ITCHIECATS LOVE RICKYM!!!!!!
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itchie&candiceThe Strings of Orion
First off, gotta say welcome once again. Glad to have more trance peoples out there.
I think your opening is either too long winded (just the percussion part) or just lacking some pieces to get it really moving.
I think with a name like "Strings For Orion" you need a much more powerful melody line to it. It's beautiful mind you, but when I saw the name I was really expecting sky high melody (such as Revelation by Alphazone or Satellite by Oceanlab, listen to those some place to get an idea of what I'm talking about).
The really soft stringy part really needed an extra boost of energy. It does eventually get it, but I think you can super boost that some more, give it more melodic orchestral power. Then rip in an arpeggiated melody. That would really get it sky high I think. Your main problem is that the song lacks power. You have an excellent grasp on melody and harmony, no doubt there, in fact the melodies are gorgeous at times. It just requires power.All comments (4)
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Hello. I've just heard your songs and I think you are quite good! I especially like "Ocean Depths" the most. Check out my stuff, too, if you have the time.