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DEADWATER MONK
Sep 07, 2008
Song: Tonight
Dude your vocals are spectacular my friend!!!
Killer track!!!
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DEADWATER MONK
Sep 07, 2008
Song: In My Eyes
Love the intro.....love the bass work
Lyrics are real strong and your vocals are killer,still could come up a bit during verses but right on!!!
Nice!!!Guitar solo!!!
Great song......You've got something here guys
Keep this up!!!
P e a c e
danny
DEADWATER MONK
Sep 07, 2008
Song: Meltdown
This is real tight,like the way it rocks in the beginning and then settles down to a great smooth verse and back to the power for chorus.Really good song!!!
I think the vocals could come up just a bit in the mix.
But you guys certainly compliment each other well.
Rock ON!!!
danny
Hi Chad!! It has been a long time since we wrote to each other. I'm doing fine; glad you're doing the same. I listened to all the tracks you have on your page. So far i think this is the best I heard. The melody is catchy....like the hard rock at intro then slowly changes to a smooth verse. Nice chorus. You still have an amazing voice; i told you that on day one. After listening several times, I think there still needs a little improvement. Your voice is a little soft at the beginning, should be a little bit louder than the instruments. And maybe to spice the track a bit a more, add some background vocals somewhere in the track...maybe another voice ...hmmm..hard to explain....wish i can show. Other than that, I think your voice is potential in any tracks. Your voice is commercial. Good luck! Lipsy