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nguyeng19
Jan 03, 2006
RE: "When I see you I have all I need to Know."
That line is playing off the "out of sight, out of mind" idea. That doubts and uncertainty are all wiped away when the other person is seen. Sort of like an "all I have to do is just SEE you, and I that'll be enough."
No worries about critiques... I'm just starting out and have no idea what I am doing anyway.
camextoxrock
Dec 06, 2005
Oh and also the chorus's melody did sound like it was almost an exact copy of some country song I've heard before so watch out for that. But that sound turned out nice. I mean it still would need some more production before it would be good for radio, but the essense is all there.
camextoxrock
Dec 06, 2005
Hey I heard "Apple Eyed" and that was cool. You have a good singing voice and the chorus is definately memorable. But for most of the song I was trying to figure out if the lyrics made sense. For example, "When I see you I have all I need to know." To me that just doesn't make sense. But don't take it too hard that's just my opinion.
"Apres Vous" This song has a nice arrangement to it. I don't really like pop in general, but this one kept my attention and wasn't annoyingly repetitive. I can tell you spent some time on this one. Keep it up man.