Im Just a Young Artist Doing What I Love, I Make What I Feel Thats What Makes Me Diffrent Than Most
I Go by Semi Moto I Love to Rap Been Doing It For A Few Years Now And Im Just Starting To Get Serious Im Always Down To Collab So Hit Me Up For a Hott 16 Free Of Charge!!!!
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Semimoto
Jul 14, 2010
Thanks Everyone For The Love Im Useing A New Mic And Acid Pro Now So Im Getting Use To It I Learned How To Use Reverb So Some Of My Newer sh** Will Have It, But Be On the Look Out For A Mixtape Called Lonely Nights Its Comeing End Of The Summer Or Beginning Of Fall Its Mostly Done So Be Ready:)
Kid Low Key
Jun 17, 2010
im feelin it fam sorry it took me so long to get here been crazy busy wit work and the label aint been on ina good min!! vocals on this coulda been a lil bit cleaner but this the type of track that the artist can do what he want cause he the one feelin the way of the lyrics nice job!! also come by peep "wanna know" track for my wife wit my G pimp G singin on the hooks
CHRONICLY CHALLENGED RECORDS
Jun 17, 2010
not bad bruh, a lil more flow would be nice but the slower thang works to. good to hear u tryin diffrent things. personal opp. could of been better could of been worse.
also i dont think i got that colab no more but i do have a bunch of new tracks up if u could peep em, n i should have a few colabs comin up for ya. peace out 100
L.N.P Mi Trayectoria
Jun 16, 2010
hey wazzup , thanks for listening my music lol even if you didnt understand me haha , I like your style and your tracks pretty cool , keep on going , take care !!
Scarecrow Beats
Jun 15, 2010
Agree with the others, sounds good, good lyrics.
Capo aka iHop Borders
Jun 14, 2010
Ey Semi. Nice to hear some new sh** from you. Pretty much what I was gonna say Pimp and JC already said. Ha. Great lyrics, but ya you shoulda spit a lil faster! But I really like the lyrics, nice to hear you on the story telling tip.
I also have a new one, please come check it out!
Jerry Vicious
Jun 13, 2010
This is a real good track man...its very detailed....I do agree with J.C however...the hook could use more takes, more depth...and yeah, its weird with hiphop man...its almost like...when you have a real slow beat...your flow sounds better faster....As far as the quality, you already stated that you are working with a new setup, so that will come with time....regardless its a great track bro...if you ever redo it when you get ya setup working right for the quality...I would love to do the hook for ya bro!
JC The Truth (NJ)
Jun 10, 2010
What up Motto, thanks for the feedback. Just took a listen to 'Make A Slit'. First off... I like the title and concept and how your lyrics stayed on topic throughout the hole track.
Just have a few pointers. On this beat, because it's so slow, would've like to hear you spit a little faster on your verses, you're almost on the verge of singing the whole song because your flow is so slow. Not that it's a bad thing... but if you would've sped your flow up a bit more I think it would've meshed better with the style of the beat.
Production wise... I'd keep working on how you mix your vocals over the beat... and recording more adlibs and back vocals on top of your actual verses and hooks. It would add more depth to your songs.
Overall, I think this is one of your stronger tracks my dude. I really like your concept and lyrics. Now all you have to do is work on the technical sh** and you'll be straight.
Much love!
JC - The Truth
www.jcthetruth.com
Shaolin Yankee
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B-MIZE
Jun 10, 2010
Real deep! I like it, got a nice story to it ( For the sadistic people lol )
Keep up the great work bro, i can really your passion for hip/hop and i know you'll just keep getting better in time! Peace!!1
B-Mize
i dont know it could of been waaaaaayyyy Better. I made a song on this same beat a couple years ago go check it out if you wanna hear my version. The song is called "Pathetic"