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JC The Truth (NJ)
Sep 09, 2009
Not bad my dude. Your flow is getting better from the last time I heard you, but could still use some polishing up. Loved the storytelling and the lyrics, you can def write lyrics. Felt like the track needed a hook though. I'd work on your production a lil bit as well, maybe it's the mic or the software you use to mix, but it sounds a lil flat. I see you put some back vocals in each ear which was a creative add to the track, but I'd record some back vocals on your verse and pan those to an ear too. Just adds a little more depth. Anyway, you're def improving and I like your choice with the beat.
Keep doin your thing boss.
JC - The Truth
www.jcthetruth.com
SHAOLIN YANKEE
9.29.09
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B-MIZE
Sep 09, 2009
Dam!! as soon as i pressed play on this sh** , i was bouncing Lol! great beat, flow was on point, lyrics are tight! Classic club banger - This track should climb the charts faster than a man with a shotgun up his ass ( You get The Idea ) Haha, Much respect Peace!!1
B-Mize
wow, this is hot