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Who Is Status
Aug 07, 2009
I figured I check a few more of your sh** out the Hook is live like every hook you be on lol. Lyrics was kinda basic sounds rather commercial but I think that was your goal. Production stays on point as normal. Eh I need to hop on a remix of this though if possible eh what kind of equipment you using im bout to step the studio up so I tyring to get some ideas but u can check me out if need be I collab with good artist for SC already Menace Ms Kidd and more
Jane Gee
Jul 20, 2009
This track is a pretty generic sounding track. The delivery was kind of blah on the first verse, the second verse started off cheesy, as far as the delivery with the 'I'm angry', 'worse than slavery', 'pay me' etc. It was kind of annoying, and when you switched it up. It went straight into that Weezy feel. The lyrics are too generic. It's like I've heard this track a million times before. There's nothing about it that stands out from other tracks that I've heard. The hook was cool, but again very common. So all in all, you're not a bad emcee and this isn't a bad track it's just not a standout track
So, After looking for this dam beat everwhere, i just decided to listen to the ones who have made a song. It may not be a standout song but its still got a crazy as VYBE and i would bump this. Lyrics are kinda Simple but hey, when you wanna get noticed sometimes simple is the way to go! I may not be the best but i do it for the love of the music as i assume you do too. Keep up the good work!