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IMMORTAL
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A journey through your mind !
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Hi we are Roger Peatman and Alan Gardiner Since late 2007 we have been writing and producing our own songs over 180 ORIGINAL songs in the Genre of ROCK DOOMTRAIN Creators of ROCK MUSIC ! https://www.youtube.com/@DOOMTRAINrocksongs CHEERS TO THE MUSIC ! THANK'S FOR YOUR SUPPORT ALAN/ROGER
Song Info
Genre
Rock Classic Rock
Charts
Peak #11
Peak in subgenre #1
Author
Gardiner/Peatman
Rights
Gardiner/Peatman 2009 All Rights Reserved
Uploaded
January 31, 2023
Track Files
MP3
MP3 21.6 MB 320 kbps 9:27
Character
Energy
relaxed, cool
high-energy
Danceable
coffee-place
dancefloor
Story behind the song
Beyond Space - Beyond Time, There you will find another place !
Lyrics
"IMMORTAL" LOOKING DOWN I SAW THE DYING FEAR A DARKENED CARCASS RIDING OUT ANOTHER YEAR TIMELESS AGE THE WONDER OF MANKIND ? A ROTTING CORPSE, THE SOUL LONG GONE IN TIME SEE A RAY OF LIGHT TO PIERCE MY NAKED EYE THAT BLACK HOLE SEEMS TO CALL ME TO THE SKIES LOST IN TIME A DISTANT PLACE WE SHOULD HAVE TRIED TO SAVE THE HUMAN RACE DRIFTING NOW WERE OUT IN SPACE A JOURNEY OF TEN MILLION YEARS IT SEEMS WE FACE AT THE SPEED OF LIGHT NO MORE TIME TO SPEND IN A TWILIGHT WORLD OF HAZE FOR I CAN SEE -------- THE END
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Lyric4him1
Jul 30, 2023
holy cow this one I got into heavy, so well done that Floyd vibe a pro mix master placement top notch great song
Roger John
Sep 13, 2010
What an opening. Awesome. That guitar is outstanding. The whole song is rocking. Perfect.
ms 007
Mar 06, 2010
Definetly a Gem! Love it all around...Great vocals , soft special lyrics & truth is always good ...l Generally Love good lyrics..these are very special. Congrats! Heartfelt & thoughtfully deep. tysm L&P Debra aka ms 007 :)
The Smivets
Jul 05, 2009
Great atmospheric tune here. Fantastic guitars and vocals as usual I have to say, and I particularly enjoyed the synth work. Great stuff!
Lucindra
Jun 29, 2009
What a great job yall did achieving such an epic sound.....loved the atmosphere and soaring leads..
Tracey Leu
Jun 28, 2009
Wow Guys, you never cease to amaze me! Love the Intro atmos...thought the lead could have been slightly louder than the rhythm (only noticed that at the intro though)...but such a small nit for such an epic sound (reminded me a bit of Pink Floyd...but not the same...you boys have your own touch of Atmospheric Rock & I love it! Totally cool! Sorry I was a bit late to this one! Luv Trace. x
ALEXIS PATRICK
Jun 28, 2009
Great guitar work, very impressive and soulful.
Rick Gross
Jun 23, 2009
Really tasty lead playing with excellent musical backing with great feeling, very well executed!! Especially great keyboards and melodic riffs. Cool Vocals too!! Peace
Hayley Oliver
Jun 21, 2009
very nice arangement, excellent work! Love hayley
LeeBoos
Jun 18, 2009
WOW! What an epic tune. I love the tempo of this one, it leaves a lot of room for you guys to shine. You guys played this from your heart. Great Job Lee
Mark Ellis
Jun 17, 2009
Seeing all the comment here, just made me realize how quickly time passes, and how little time I have had to spend recently listening to good music here on Soundclick, and this.. is good, a real treat, and enjoyed very much.. well done guys, another fab track.. cant fault the construction, production, vocs, guitars etc . good stuff!!!!
DEADWATER MONK
Jun 16, 2009
Its unanomous!!! DOOMTRAIN simply ROCKS!!! Fabulous production,extremely good performance all around.and wow.........what lovely vocal melodies and presentation! AWESOME STUFF GUYS!!!
ALPHA ONE OMEGA
Jun 15, 2009
Outstanding work,completely capturing the original classic prog.rock theme with distinct Doomtrain style & sound. Absolutely wonderfull
Robert Strom
Jun 15, 2009
Love it guys! Sounds like a "journey" through space and time with a lightening bolt of a rockin pink floydish guitar solo, that really hit me right where it hurts (in a good way). Great job with the production on this one, very good quality recording.
Electric Shadow
Jun 15, 2009
Woooo love this it rocks stright up! ~ES~
Kevroc
Jun 14, 2009
Great epic song. Awesome production. Sounds great on my crappy notebook speakers, so I can't wait to listen on my monitors! Really enjoyed it guys. It's a keeper. All the best! Kev
Shelia D.
Jun 14, 2009
You guys are awesome....and "Immortal" is fabulous in every way...very passionate. Outstanding guitar, vocals, production and lyrics. Much success to you! Shelia
Michael Duran
Jun 12, 2009
finally got a chance to drop by to listen to this, and I must say.. BRAVO!!!! this has everything a great Progressive track needs with tons of passionate vocals and solos!
Carlos Carranza
Jun 12, 2009
Monster rock song....The sounds of the guitar are so good!!...Very good guitar parts.....Wonderfull!
Painted Water
Jun 12, 2009
I agree with everyones comments. Epic, great guitar work, well-made and just a good all around song. What I like best is your great guitar solos. Well, all I can suggest is that the string synth sound, sounds just tad bit loud to my ears. I like it though. Minor, minor, I hope you don't mind my observation. This song is excellent and I give it a big thumbs up!