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Make your move.
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My first song here, feedback would be nice.
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I can't really introduce myself...lets wait and see shall we.
Song Info
Genre
Beats Pop
Charts
Peak #2,693
Peak in subgenre #135
Rights
FM 2008
Uploaded
January 12, 2009
Track Files
MP3
MP3 3.5 MB 112 kbps 4:25
Story behind the song
I messed with it.
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Comments 4
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DEADWATER MONK
Mar 16, 2009
I like the intensity I agree it could have some more chord variations, Overall great job!!! I like your melodies It does seem like all these sounds are kinda close together in texture and might be interesting to hear something a little contrasting.......horns maybe? Nice one !
Capo aka iHop Borders
Mar 13, 2009
this is alright i like it but the melody was a lil repetive but good work nonetheless
DJ Future Sphere
Feb 24, 2009
Hi there, FM. It's funny, but the arrangement of this track reminds me in some way the works of early hardcore/rave. The melody is cool. Anyways, you've got a good song here, and I believe, that you've made songs much better than this. Any-way, this is it, in the score. Sergey
Jean-Luc Stoufflet
Jan 29, 2009
Hey FM, Jean-Luc here. I'm re-rating the song because it makes no sense to give a rating to the lyrics and vocals (when both elements were not present in the song). Anyway, as I said before, good first effort here on Soundclick. The production is crisp. My only issue is that the melody got to be repetitive after a while, and there was a big period of no music at the end of the track. Despite that, good song overall.