Hi, lady! First off, I think you have an absolutely charming voice that's really suited for this song. I have a couple of points to make that I think would really help you improve on this song:
1. in the beginning stanza, your voice is almost lost because you're still using your head voice. Try playing around with your chest voice, or a low mix of your head and chest voice to really resonate in your lower register. If you have trouble finding your chest voice, speak the lyrics and try to match that resonance when you sing.
2. You "scooped" a lot in the beginning, which sometimes affected your pitch. Scooping is fine if it's your style, your flare. But do it TOO much, and you might throw yourself off pitch.
Your voice is so clear and pretty, and I'd love to hear more of you :)
Hi, lady! First off, I think you have an absolutely charming voice that's really suited for this song. I have a couple of points to make that I think would really help you improve on this song: 1. in the beginning stanza, your voice is almost lost because you're still using your head voice. Try playing around with your chest voice, or a low mix of your head and chest voice to really resonate in your lower register. If you have trouble finding your chest voice, speak the lyrics and try to match that resonance when you sing. 2. You "scooped" a lot in the beginning, which sometimes affected your pitch. Scooping is fine if it's your style, your flare. But do it TOO much, and you might throw yourself off pitch. Your voice is so clear and pretty, and I'd love to hear more of you :)