This is a lot better version. I would like to officially express my utmost gratitude to Justin aka adsr of Jamtank.net for his mastery touch in repairing all my recording flaws, mixing down and mastering the song. I owe you big time man!
The drums actually sound over-powering on my computer, unlike what one of the top posters said.
The drums are a little too compressed, although I like them. Best part of the entire mix.
This isn't a mixing thing, but I think the guitars are extremely boring. It's all basic quarter strums. No rests, no eighth or sixteenth strums, no hammer ons/pull offs... just no groove at all. There's no fills. It's, well... terrible.
The guitars are also too low compared to everything else. Unless that's why you're masking how boring they are.
Vocals need some more compression, or the whole mix needs compression/limiting.
The overall mix needs some reverb and other mastering things done to it.
The drums actually sound over-powering on my computer, unlike what one of the top posters said. The drums are a little too compressed, although I like them. Best part of the entire mix. This isn't a mixing thing, but I think the guitars are extremely boring. It's all basic quarter strums. No rests, no eighth or sixteenth strums, no hammer ons/pull offs... just no groove at all. There's no fills. It's, well... terrible. The guitars are also too low compared to everything else. Unless that's why you're masking how boring they are. Vocals need some more compression, or the whole mix needs compression/limiting. The overall mix needs some reverb and other mastering things done to it.