Closer
I feel your whispers warm upon my face,
right away my heart begins to race
your eyes are hungry...your soul is mine to see
the curtains blow and expose the night,
you shiver slightly...I pull you tight
because I want you and you want me
closer
while the moon is young
closer
then we'll be one
we were born to be lovers,
we long for each other
so honey won't you come
closer and closer
we taste the wine on each others' lips,
feel desire with our fingertips
we'll take what love offers...we'll take it slow
the deep breaths...the scratches on our skin,
when one kiss ends and the next begins
and as the night gets hotter we'll only grow
closer
while the moon is young
closer
then we'll be one
we were born to be lovers,
we long for each other
so honey won't you come
closer and closer
ev'ry moment we feel
of the love we make together
ev'ry secret revealed
Darling, they just bring us ever
closer
while the moon is young
closer
then we'll be one...
(c)2002 Tapani Rauha/Robert George
Another great song, you've got there. The title says 'remix', but I think the leadvocal is way too soft and the synths (or are they guitars?) in the back are a bit too much on the foreground IMO, so maybe you should consider another remix. I was also hoping the vocal melody would touch some higher notes in the end so they would give me the shivers, if you know what I mean. She's got a very nice voice, but she's not giving it all - while this song has plenty opportunity.
Another great song, you've got there. The title says 'remix', but I think the leadvocal is way too soft and the synths (or are they guitars?) in the back are a bit too much on the foreground IMO, so maybe you should consider another remix. I was also hoping the vocal melody would touch some higher notes in the end so they would give me the shivers, if you know what I mean. She's got a very nice voice, but she's not giving it all - while this song has plenty opportunity.