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MP3
MP3 2.6 MB • 128 kbps • 2:52
Story behind the song
david - this song kind of sucks...okay, it really sucks, the lyrics suck butt, the music is only okay, i suppose it's salvagable but it needs a lot of work, everytime i listen to this song i feel like i'm a freshman in high school yelling, "AnaRRCHy In Da Uk!!! uP DaA PunxxXXZ!!!!" ew.... i am a fan of the changing chorus, and specifically the "there's no war outside your door, just a cancer spreading around, with no one to make a sound" section, but the rest needs a complete overall. in the music department i feel there's something missing, i'm not sure what it is, but this doesn't sound full, it's very choppy and awkward, i tried to fill in some of the space with a guitar lead over the verse (thus why said guitar part isn't mixed in with the song well, because it was added later), and i suppose it helps, but there's something wrong in there that still needs a lot of fixing.
Ryan ~ Once again, i really like this song. i really get to rock out in a way that i love and dont get to do that often. the "spooky" section is an A+ i dont like the effect at the begining of the song with the effectsa and volume change.
Dustin-I feel strang playing this song. Nothing I play feels like it fits. The indavidual parts in this song are cool. But the overall compasition is very bad and needs work. The melody and lyrics are my favorite part in this song. "And someone tell me why the tv screen is showing tragity", I'm sorry David but those words and the way you sing it are amazing. PPPPLLLLEEEEAAASSSEE don't chang it!. And even though it doesn't fit, the rocking part at the end sounds cool.
Lyrics
i see no face and the features start to blur as they carry me away, stuck in a country that's run by a tyrant child who pays no mind to yesterday, and when they bury me so deeply underground i hope you're sleeping safe and sound, cause they'll watch over you through darkness and through light, a day turned into night that never came out right, with wire taps on your telephone's, they'll try to save you from yourself, and some tell me please why the tv screen's showing tragedy, when that isn't "gonna" help (that whole verse makes me cringe, HARDEFFINGCORE!) and when they bury me so deeply underground hope you're sleeping safe and sound, there's no war just a cancer spreading around, with no one to make a sound, can we stop now and predict try to wait a minute, try to bring the whole thing down, it's so hard no to resist with open arms and clentched fists when no one can make a sound, and when they bury me so deeply underground i hope you're sleeping safe and sound, cause when they come for you no one will turn them down, it's what they'll dream about
