On the whole, i dont think it's a bad rhythm. the 'lead' bit is kinda repetitive... but i quite like it altogether. Also the first time i used an actual bass to record stuff as opposed to a pitch-shifter.
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This is just me doin some stuff on the guitar.
Thats about it really...
A lot of the songs i've done are REALLY repetitive... but i guess i'm still working out where i want to take them.