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The Skin of Our Teeth - 2025 Remix

Darren Zieger

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Inspired by two Thornton Wilder plays, "The Skin of Our Teeth" and "Our Town."
ballad atmospheric
Folk music for postmoderns
Note about the "2025/2026 Remixes." Since I don't currently have the resources to book studio time or musicians, I am polishing my old demos in Suno. I'm doing my best to keep Suno from making alterations to my compositions, and succeeding about two thirds of the time, but it is an uphill battle. For the sake of transparency, I am making an effort to delineate all of the (usually very slight) alterations Suno has made to the recordings, but it will take a while. In the meantime, once you've heard a "remix" to hear how I want the song to sound, you may want to scroll down to the original demo, which, in a few cases, will be a better representation of how the song _goes_. Until I've finished those notes, I can tell you that everything except "Celestial Street" (which goes off the rails at about the 3:30 mark) is close to identical to my original compositions, with tiny changes in chord voicings (i.e. choice of inversions, etc.) or slight interpretations of the melody that any singer would make in a cover version anyway. ====== I am what you might call a musical generalist. I listen to pretty much everything and I compose in pretty much any style, though I concentrate mainly on folk, folk-rock, rock, synth-pop, alternative, comedy, musical theatre, jazz, new-age, film music, avant-garde, and the occasional lullaby (why sing your kid to sleep with "Rock-a-bye Baby" when you can can create something personalized?). I've done most of my professional (i.e. paid) work in the theatre, where I've been musical director for dozens of productions. I was also musical director of Mental Floss, the legendary Miami improv group, for over 500 performances; I recently did a stint with Laughing Gas, which rose from the ashes of Mental Floss 11 years ago to become the longest running improv group in South Florida. As a singer-songwriter, I've concentrated most of my energy on my signature style of synth-driven folk-rock (sort of Indigo Girls meets Vangelis). I'm also something of a minor celebrity in the world of Filk (folk music for science fiction fans), where I am proud to be the object of the worlds smallest international fan base.
Song Info
Genre
Beats Beats General
Charts
#8 in subgenre Peak #6
Charts
Peak #110
Author
Darren Zieger
Rights
1989, 2025
Uploaded
November 15, 2025
Track Files
MP3
MP3 5.0 MB 182 kbps 3:50
Meta Data
Vocals
Male
Character
Energy
relaxed, cool
high-energy
Danceable
coffee-place
dancefloor
Positivity
dark, sad, angry
happy
Appeal
unique
radio-friendly
Story behind the song
Another successful Suno remix. Other than delaying the entrance of a chord change for a beat at one point, it's a faithful recreation of my composition. Well, it also gets the rhythm of the opening line wrong (it should be the same as the rest of the verse). Annoying. Otherwise, this is my song as written.
Lyrics
[Verse 1] Two by two we swim the flood It's hard to keep your head above The rainbow fades, the earth renews We struggle through the life we choose In darkness and light Through doors against the night Past rivers in the rain On the sidewalks, through the echoes of a distant passing train [Verse 2] For after all, we're only men And what was dust is dust again We turn the fields and pass our lives In moments never realized And youth is a dream A poorly lit scene Unrehearsed and overacted Tending to extremes [Chorus] And in our town You need never lock your door You have lived here No matter where you're born But the ice comes And the angry waters rise It's a new world So we gather up our lives Against the cold Against the rain Against the winds of war that tore this home Up from its foundation The clamor and the sea change The ever-burning mark of Cain And when I have to start again I count the hours passing by The stars that light the evening sky The words that try to tell us why [Outro] Two by two we swim the flood It's hard to keep your head above
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