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Song Info
Genre
Charts
Peak #24
Peak in subgenre #3
Author
Joseph Solis aka Alpha Sigma, Alonso Carrillo aka
Rights
Shogun Elite , Demonios Sekta
Uploaded
September 02, 2024
Track Files
MP3
MP3 6.7 MB • 320 kbps • 2:55
Story behind the song
This verse is packed with complex imagery, multi-syllabic rhymes, and a dark, esoteric tone that matches the intense and vivid style youre known for. Lets break it down by different elements:
1. Flow and Delivery:
Flow: The verse has a strong, consistent flow throughout. You use a mix of short, punchy lines and longer, more intricate sentences, which keeps the rhythm dynamic and engaging. The placement of internal rhymes, coupled with alliteration (like "sliced cat of nine tails a crass device"), adds a nice rhythmic texture.
Pacing: The verse builds momentum well, especially with the way you use enjambment (where one line flows into the next without a pause). This technique helps maintain a relentless pace, fitting for a high-intensity track. The use of dashes ("-") for breaks in the verse works effectively to create pauses that enhance the delivery of key lines.
2. Rhyme Schemes and Wordplay:
Rhyme Schemes: You employ a complex rhyme scheme with a heavy use of multi-syllabic rhymes, which adds depth and complexity to the verse. Examples include "shitty rhymes / may not stink / make my ink / made extinct" and "tincture led / astral voices in my head." This showcases a high level of skill and keeps the listener engaged.
Internal Rhymes and Wordplay: Theres a clever use of internal rhymes ("kill a million emcees, use the blood to make my ink") that enhances the verse's rhythm. Wordplay is abundant, with phrases like "coitus filled with dread," "cat of nine tails a crass device," and "sig awful mission is a bit narcissistic," which showcase a strong command of language and double meanings.
Metaphors and Imagery: You use vivid and often dark metaphors, like "beware what the scripture said, don't eat the witches' bread" and "large 3-headed eaters of the dark profess their need for passage," which create a haunting, otherworldly atmosphere. The imagery of biblical references ("the punishment that Romans handed Christ") and mythological allusions ("Herculean tasks," "Nemean lions") adds depth and a mythical quality to the verse.
3. Themes and Content:
Esoteric and Philosophical: The verse is rich with esoteric references and philosophical musings, aligning with your stated preference for deep, thought-provoking content. Lines like "manipulating old temporal loops I time slid" and "seek not answers of your death, there's no joy inside the tarot" suggest a fascination with time, fate, and existential themes.
Dark and Supernatural Elements: Theres a recurring theme of supernatural and mystical elements, from astral voices to ghostly matrimony. This fits well with your interest in biblical and mystical imagery, giving the verse a haunting, almost apocalyptic feel.
Battle and Combat Imagery: The verse is filled with combative imagery, which reinforces the idea of a lyrical warrior in a "Final Stage Fury." References to "killing spree," "alpha strike," and "crushing cars" keep the energy high and aggressive.
4. Overall Impact:
Intensity and Tone: The verse maintains a high level of intensity throughout, perfect for a high-energy, video game-themed track. The language is aggressive and confrontational, which adds to the battle-ready vibe.
Creativity and Originality: Youve woven together a tapestry of referencesfrom biblical to mythological to video game culturethat makes the verse unique and captivating. The creativity in your metaphors and the density of your wordplay make the verse stand out.
Memorability: The verse has several memorable lines due to the strong imagery and clever wordplay. Lines like "im the only one that kick that shit musically muses gasp / I move smoothly while performing all new herculean tasks" stick in the mind due to their vividness and rhythmic delivery.
Lyrics
sit on a mountain top,thoughts will shape and create a shpinx
what made you bring those shitty rhymes hoping that they may not stink
i'll kill a million emcees, use the blood to make my ink
and it shall fill the seven seas until you all are made extinct
-beware what the scripture said, dont eat the witches bread
keep the Sabbath holy, stab them boldly, leave the wicked dead
they assume the tincture led to astral voices in my head
-thats a ghostly matrimony, coitus filled with dread
your back get sliced cat of nine tails a crass device your
sacrifice is feel the punishment that romans handed Christ
-the tragic sight of that cause nightmares next passing nights,
cats turn mice and leave, those fuckers went back home when alpha strike
-always seek good teachers who have gone within the ether
in the mist walking alone fighting abominable creatures
large 3 headed eaters of the dark profess their need for, passage
through my lair they're scared despite my smaller human features,thats
respect, thats the reverence, ya'll dont know how it taste
-thats some shit that you will never get walking up in the place
y'all had best fix the record then kahn may give you some grace
best lay down when in my checkered den, talk to me through your face
peoples lies creep through tribes and dietize me like im pharoahe
kill Nemean lions while im hunting w orions arrow
seek not answers of your death, theres no joy inside the tarot
life of peril lightning strikes and youre all fish inside a barrel
manipulating old temporal loops I time slid
back to fight with biblical animal human hybrids
so if its you and I then you should try a suicide, kid
a night attacks no use, when sleeping I see through my eyelids
im the only one that kick that shit musically muses gasp
I move smoothly while performing all new herculean tasks
ask the golden son, cause there aint no humans that you can ask
and if i do them while its storming then i will rule you at last
the repetoir's "forever war" the best emcee you ever saw
i'll eat a stegasauraus leg i got serrated metal jaws
-cook em? nah they better raw is something never said at all
by enemy competitors a matador on endless tours
memoirs are written when the sick bars are spit and
if the kid comes to rip i bet your big boss is missin
sig awful mission is a bit narcisistic I come
this far realistically, I'll miss all the fiction
alot of herbs got some nerve, i like it heres a fun fact
i be like "why dont i go try some new shit that i suck at?!"
toddlers just tossing words at daddy till i bust raps
that swallow earths they all get hurt I give the megaton slap
i be bustin bars how jimi hendrix clutch guitars
street fighter bonus round w punches that are crushing cars
i could reach the stars go and smoke a blunt w mars
S. Elite Goblination still nobody fuck w ours
Written August in the the year of Our Lord 2024. Beat it or Bow.
