Lyrics
Gathered in an antique bowl
All the letters from their joyful life
Kneeling like prayer, she'll stoke the fire
She'll burn the words, they are for her alone
Like unwritten pages..
Hopes, cries, dreams, sighs
Will flow out, debris after rain
Our untold stories..
Smiles, scrapes, charms, the screams
Will go out, smoldered by rain
Countless hours make a life
Sheer number of moments stun
Commotion, struggled swim
Ripples will calm to glass
Like unwritten pages..
Friends, shams, loves, spills
Will flow out, debris after rain
Our heartfelt stories..
Kids, aches, meals, the scars
Will go out, smoldered by rain
Like unwritten pages..
Jokes, peeves, pets, lies
Will flow out, debris after rain
Our ancient stories..
Thrills, falls, truths, the hells
Will go out, smothered in sand by time
Nice work, Thielus! Vocals are good, if a bit verby, and I'm a big fan of m9 chords. Again, good stuff.