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Supermanedope
Nov 06, 2011
keep it up! i feel ya!
Yuan-chan
Jun 11, 2011
Thx for comment I really appreciate it.
Yea that song is dope I like the hook.
The Instrumental is simple but cool.
~chan~
CHRiS MECCA
May 25, 2011
keep it up bro!
Jerry Vicious
Apr 04, 2011
Damn man....Just realized I never rated this joint...I've listened to it a few times man since you put it up...this is a radio smash right here....I love the beat, the guy on the hook is hot...and your flow is perfect for this one....good sh** man!
Capo aka iHop Borders
Mar 22, 2011
Alright, here's my personal opinion....
Krafty is right, sometimes tracks like this don't need the best lyrics. You know the lyrics weren't your best, but I don't think it takes away from the song, really. That hook carries the song real nicely. This does have some commercial potential. The quality of your vocals is better, and that makes the song much easier to listen to. It can still be a better mix, but hey...
Overall, pretty good job. I think I know what you were going for. Personally, not a track I'd really listen to but you did your thing and I can't hate on that.
Effect Beats
Mar 11, 2011
This is a great track Semi. It's got commercial potential and even though the lyrics are a bit standard, it works on these type of beats.
Keep up the good work!
JC The Truth (NJ)
Mar 04, 2011
GETTING MUCH BETTER MAN!
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Pikk
Feb 28, 2011
sorry for the delay.. song's dope from an artistic perspective and i'm not one to tell someone how "their" tracks should be written or performed, so keep doing "you".. 3/5..
PhadeCN
Feb 17, 2011
You did your thing on this track - this song ain't exactly my type of song. I have noticed your production and vocal quality have gone up which is always nice to see. It makes songs more listenable as a whole. Overall, you did your thing and I can't front on that.
EAR 2 THA BEAT
Feb 13, 2011
aight bro, you def gettin better with each track man!! I like what I hear, def a good song to invest sth ion agood mix,
keep em coming bro!
And thx for your love as usual man Its muchly appreciated
peace
EAR 2 THA BEAT
Jethro Beats
Feb 13, 2011
hey homie sorry for the late reply, I actually love this track, the hook is dope as f*** , the beat was dope 2
liked ur verses, only bad thing in this track is the mixing, get this track to a studio to master it again
really good banger
4/5
J
BROTHER P ON THE TRAK
Feb 12, 2011
In my opinion vocals could have been mixed/mastered better on the verses. Otherwise it's a solid track!
Krafty
Feb 11, 2011
I hate to throw a spanner in the works (or do I? haha) but songs like this ain't always about the lyrics. To be honest, the chorus carries the song nicely. The only thing that let's the track down is the mix -- but you know your boy can fix that ;-)
Vocally you did your thing. I think it can be tough sometimes to put your all into a slow-paced track like this. So you definitely did your personal best and that's all I'ma ask from you.
Psycho Beatz
Feb 09, 2011
Thanks for the comment bro, I checked the song the beat wasn't really my style but overall its not bad, your flow was nice the lyrics weren't your best but nothing wrong with them, let me know when you've got more up!
P.B
Shamba Menelek - Lyrical Great
Feb 09, 2011
I like the flo. The hook sounds nice. None of the lyrics grabbed me tho. The reverb is kinda heavy but the vocal levels sound good. The fllow stood out the most.
B-MIZE
Feb 07, 2011
Sup bro, 3 stars on everything here. The beat wasn't for me and I KNOW YOU, and know that you can write better lyrics than this :)
I felt like the lyrics were written in a hurry for the release of the track. The quality is better vocally than in your previous tracks, but i still feel you could have came harder on this one. I like it though, great effort. I hope mine and all the other comments give you an idea my man. Peace!!
B-Mize
DestinationMars
Feb 07, 2011
Flow was on point, lyrics was prettty simple I think you coulda came harder, I gave vocals a 3 and production coz ur vocals could be clearer, I felt it tho. Not my sorta vibe, but it was a good track man Id play it again for sure! Keep up :)
nikeboy1
Feb 07, 2011
I thought this beat was dope. The hook was on point too fam.
Jrum Beats
Feb 07, 2011
Not a 5 star rating, but the heart is there, and you stuck to the hook which is good homie, i really didnt like this hook or beat tho not my style.
Nice 1 homie..