Hey Mark, I really enjoyed this collaboration - kudos to all involved here. Love the phasey lead guitar throughout the song! Your vox still has that edge I've always liked. Guitar work is exceptional.
Mr. Wilson's drums are a bit too soft, imo, I would definitely boost its performance as it is driving the song nicely. More snap and more depth would definitely give it more presence. The bass, while a delivering a great pattern, has minor timing issues. Nothing a bit of editing wouldn't fix, though.
Vocals - as mentioned above, nothing I would change on the singing part. Perhaps, add a bit mid freqs to your voice and cut the very high freqs as they (for the Blues) sparkle a bit too much for my taste.
The lyrics are fantastic - actually, I've always wanted to write a song about the woes in our lives caused by our hobby ... :-)
Great song!!
Heinz.
Hey Mark, I really enjoyed this collaboration - kudos to all involved here. Love the phasey lead guitar throughout the song! Your vox still has that edge I've always liked. Guitar work is exceptional. Mr. Wilson's drums are a bit too soft, imo, I would definitely boost its performance as it is driving the song nicely. More snap and more depth would definitely give it more presence. The bass, while a delivering a great pattern, has minor timing issues. Nothing a bit of editing wouldn't fix, though. Vocals - as mentioned above, nothing I would change on the singing part. Perhaps, add a bit mid freqs to your voice and cut the very high freqs as they (for the Blues) sparkle a bit too much for my taste. The lyrics are fantastic - actually, I've always wanted to write a song about the woes in our lives caused by our hobby ... :-) Great song!! Heinz.