not bad at all!
complex (good).
unfortunately too noisy, metalic...
extremely dark---perfectly in line with the theme.
ironic: (I believe) one way to escape the misery of life is exactly thru music---but of a more "apolinian", "elevated" kind---Beethoven, Tchaikovsky, Yes...
(the darkness in your music is too depressive. it's the metal taste.)
your voice, priscilla, very beautiful...
this song is very difficult for the voice---lot of semitones around a central tone, etc.
you did a wonderfull job, given this difficulty, but there is still space for improvement---hope you understand this as constructive critique :-)
(in sum: fight, escape the misery by ascending into more luminous musical forms, always bettering your voice along the way :-)
cheers from the neighborhood :-)
not bad at all! complex (good). unfortunately too noisy, metalic... extremely dark---perfectly in line with the theme. ironic: (I believe) one way to escape the misery of life is exactly thru music---but of a more "apolinian", "elevated" kind---Beethoven, Tchaikovsky, Yes... (the darkness in your music is too depressive. it's the metal taste.) your voice, priscilla, very beautiful... this song is very difficult for the voice---lot of semitones around a central tone, etc. you did a wonderfull job, given this difficulty, but there is still space for improvement---hope you understand this as constructive critique :-) (in sum: fight, escape the misery by ascending into more luminous musical forms, always bettering your voice along the way :-) cheers from the neighborhood :-)