John I think my original comments are sound. However, regarding "The meter is a little tough for me to follow". The bass line is "busy", and during the vocal, for me at least, distracting. Overall listening now the "beat" is consistent. The bass line, while quite interesting, isn't (IMHO) "supporting" during the vocal.
But as I said on the forum "Your Song, Your Production".
If I'm producing, the bass player would be asked (instructed) to "hold down the bottom" and stop "soloing" during the verse and chorus.
But I'm not producing, nor am I playing the bass....
All the best,
Tom
John I think my original comments are sound. However, regarding "The meter is a little tough for me to follow". The bass line is "busy", and during the vocal, for me at least, distracting. Overall listening now the "beat" is consistent. The bass line, while quite interesting, isn't (IMHO) "supporting" during the vocal. But as I said on the forum "Your Song, Your Production". If I'm producing, the bass player would be asked (instructed) to "hold down the bottom" and stop "soloing" during the verse and chorus. But I'm not producing, nor am I playing the bass.... All the best, Tom