Diane Hurst
@kiwiabuela
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Vancouver, WA USA
Joined February2 2011
A singer/songwriter, learning about how to do recordings and starting to learn about performing. Member of NSAI and SongU.
Music adventure blog at http://notesandnotions.weebly.com
Stay-at-home homeschooling mom; also have a homeschool curriculum business at www.gentleshepcurr.com and blog at www.gentleshepherdweavings.blogspot.com
My Music
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4 songs
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5
jamestoffee
Oct 19, 2012
”…..”Flying Ball” cute sounds like you had some good help; I’d have like to have heard the melody go high –even exaggerated on the word “flew”…..personal preference…..”This is a Question” I wonder if a minor chord progression would work better to fit the message….but might make it too heavy- just something to experiment with and find a balance. Here again is a bit heavy on the telling instead of showing…..Listen to Sade’s “Pearls” I really gets you (or me) moved by the story telling in details http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=un8xpMnsf9U
“Chocolate” I was fine with it until CHOCOLATE FALAFEL
OR A BOWL OF CHOCOLATE COLE SLAW!.......doesn’t sound too appetizing…..but I did like the “rap” choco sections…nice!
jamestoffee
Oct 19, 2012
Hi Diane,
I am having fun listening through your songs. I like the melody in "Hope" and clever lyrics in Roll On.....Here is a song about who steps in when the BPA is out LOL http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=10306826 Y9W17 Blackout......."Spiderweb" so true ;) ......"Bad News Blues" Nice playing and entertaining message....."Baby" nice interpretation...here is a poem I put to music....similar in melody to yours http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=6844749 The Mystery of Answered Prayer....."Are we there?" I like your songs, but I don't have any connections :( But a lot of images to relate to....good prosody on the chorus "Dedicated to a 6 yr old...that's a lot to be on a child's mind LOL “WALK BY FAITH” be careful to keep the point of view consistent; the audience switches from a person on the verses and to God on the chorus…..For me there is a bit too much telling and could have more showing in this one…..I like the chord change on “knees”…..
ljgriggs
Feb 24, 2011
Greetings from "Hot'Lanta", GA... Thank you so very much for including an old blues picker like me in your list of friends!!!
Dark Productions
Feb 14, 2011
thank you diane for the friendship. i appreciate very much :)
like flying ball .. perfect for a kids soundtrack , just perfect !
any young white girls here? send me your email? number