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lovemeelmo
Oct 04, 2010
Seriously dude. Im actually bein nice here 1 get better with your raps. Do you like remix your voice? if so QUIT it doesn't sound good. You want people to like you then dont change. Be you. Don't just sit there and diss people. Rap about what you know. Who you love. The down falls in life. Things people can relate to. Your probably thinking im just an ugly ass whore what do i know. Im not a genius with rap. But i listen to a lot of music and i have to be able to relate to it. And i write poetry. Ok. And quit trying to "defeat" people then if you do have fans you just look like an ass. And they might stop liking you for that. Take my advice if you want. If you don't then fine that's your choice. But dont bite my head off for being nice, Shelby
lovemeelmo
Sep 01, 2010
Dude im sorry to say but i don't like your music. Its really bad. Truthfully the wanna be gangsta/Rappa Justin Bieber is betta den u. But maybe i can give you some help i'll give you somethin to listen to and maybe you can learn from it and become a better rapper cuz thats just how nice i am..Well here you go http://www.myspace.com/rappingagnostic :) bye now hope you work on bein a betta rappa and dnt make anymore of that sh*** the belongs in da trash
lovemeelmo
Sep 01, 2010
Dude im sorry to say but i don't like your music. Its really bad. Truthfully the wanna be gangsta/Rappa Justin Bieber is betta den u. But maybe i can give you some help i'll give you somethin to listen to and maybe you can learn from it and become a better rapper cuz thats just how nice i am..Well here you go http://www.myspace.com/rappingagnostic :) bye now hope you work on bein a betta rappa and dnt make anymore of that sh*** the belongs in da trash