marksongs
hi.... i,m Mark, and most of the songs on this page are from a spiritual point of view, in one way or another.
most are from a new thought perspective, some specificaly from A Course in Miracles, and others might just be the groaning of the spirit, or some old country song i like.. ha ha.Band/artist history
i'll fill this in later.. more interested in the future than the past, anyways.Have you performed in front of an audience?i used to play for a living... now its just a hobby, but a fun one. i play at a Unity church sometimes.
Your musical influences
i like everything. from hard core punk to jazzy ballads.Anything else?
anything goes?... what a time to get shy. i'll fill this in later.All comments (2)
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I can hear what you are trying to do. I think the song is good but the production and delivery need work. Specifically, the drum track seems to be dragging which makes the rythmn of the whole song a little herky jerky. You might want to try just playing the minimum number of bars for each instrument into ACID and looping the parts. Lastly, the vocal delivery was kind of timid. If you are going to sing it then sing it with the full emotional force of the lyric. - my two cents. Good song though.