Luis Javier
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neoavenger
Jul 17, 2006
Ameteur, huh? The rest of us better watch out when you turn pro! It sounds like you already know how to score things well for good balance and tone, which is pretty great in of itself. You will be amazed how fast your composing will get better! Your site is definetely one i will be checking back on to see your new stuff. Keep up the good work.
-Ian
rk6971
Jun 13, 2006
Hello Luis. A Summer's Serenade is very beautiful! I absolutely love the melody. Is this just a sample or all there is of the piece? You must continue the composition. Amazing. I read that you like the part between 51-54secs in your waltz... So do I. I would have added more of that in the song, but then it wouldn't be "simple". I think you're doing a wonderful job. I don’t believe in “amateur“ composing. You obviously have emotion\reason behind your music as well as the talent to write it. You have the ability. Don’t fall short. I wish you the very best in the future. Thanks for being apart of sound click and sharing your music.
You can’t see but you’re getting a standing ovation right now. Congratulations on the Summer's Serenade 2nd movement. But once again - too short. This piece (including the 1st) is very relaxing and calming to the soul. Maybe that’s why it seems soo short… I am drawn right in. I would have to categorize these compositions as “beautifully depressing” works of art! And trust me; this is a good thing in my opinion. They both end on a suspense… The next part needs a slightly faster tempo. As far as the melody and harmony, you’ve got that down perfect. I’m babbling here - sorry. Can’t really explain what I’m trying to say. But yeah, compose a 3rd movement. Keep in mind the tempo. You are amazing! Thanks soo much for sharing. With great respect, Roger.