I like your music. Here are some notes on this specific song:
Pros:
-good dynamics build with intro.
-near the beginning where the ride is used to compliment a guitar riff, the bell (or whatever on the ride was hit) sounded perfectly.
-frequent enough change not to get boring.
-perfect transition to the c section (starts at 1:16) but goes to a part up higher that doesnt mix well with the "droney" feel.
-nice clean section, then buidling up again mixed perfectly with the clean tone that goes into the built up section (but not such a great transfer back into an earlier section.)
cons:
-cymbals are a tad too loud and are also not distinct (enough) when a different cymbal is hit.
-guitars have awkward feedback.
-snare "blends in" when hit on a bass stroke at the same time.

Overall, I liked the song because It had various changes in dynamics and texture throughout the piece, also melodies were very fitted for what was going on at the time though they could've been a bit louder,

(Y)..\m/

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Moca, Dominican Republic

Metal • Heavy Metal

December 31, 2007

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