
Iphorill
Comments
16
cruiser0
May 26, 2013
I have to say that your words have touched my heart and the surgery was successful ......
Second Hand King
Jun 24, 2010
This is by far one of my favorite songs. I listen to this often from the Mixtape. In a perfect world, you would be signed and have time to make songs like this all day, keep up the good work Iphorill. You've come a long way, don't stop now.
em4life
Jan 29, 2010
Song: Devil On My Bed
I heard this song before a very long time and gotta say u upgrated it in this version. I definitely like the beat and the melody, it makes the song kinda dynamic.
If it was for the melody, I'd say it is kinda a happy song. Cos of this the melody slighlty doesnt fit me with the idea of the song and it's lyrics. The beat sounds too 'light' for the content of the song (u know, if I saw a devil on my bed, I'd hear different kind of melody, tho' I know this is just a metaphor).
The lyrics is aight but it's visible u wrote it before some time, the lyrics you write now are better. I miss some message in the song a lil bit but it was prolly a personal confession rather than some message-bearing song.
Vocals. Dunno, but when u rap ur voice is strange, I mean the way u recorded it. Did u use some kind of effect there (like echo or somtehing like dat)? I know u are not in a studio so the voice cant be 100% clear but ur voice in the other songs is clearer.
However, u made a significan
Iphorill
Jan 15, 2010
(Did you check your message box Suzi? Just wondering...)
Thank you so much for this long helpful constructive feedback. You're absolutely right about alsmot everything you said. First, thanks for the compliment regadring my English Language. I'm glag you liked the main message or the theme of the song. You're definitely right about the way I spit. It's called delivery, my delivery is pretty weak and that's due to the lack or experience. It's good to know that you liked the beat, it took me ages to make that. and thank you SO MUCH for voting!
Iphorill
Jan 15, 2010
yeah the song is Suicide Note I just re-recorded it and renamed it, that's why it sounded similar. The use of Em's song was just to get the radio sound as I couldn't find any in sound libraries.
thanx for the honest feedback...anyways, I did this with a lousy mic...check my latest track Silence Of The Cemetery it's at number 42 on Alternative Rap Songs Chart out of 116,816 songs...I hope you enjoy it (that's of course, if you want to listen to it )
em4life
Jan 14, 2010
Song: Farewell
I like the lyrics. Not cos of the content but cos of the use of words and creation of rhymes. The beginning was fine, tho' I dunno if Em'd be OK with using his stuff in ur song.
Melody is kinda similar to the songs I heard before - the piano sound etc. Beat is OK.
em4life
Oct 10, 2008
I wasn't on this site for ages and just stopped by for some updates to be made on that mine. I couldn't find your Alphabet among my radio station songs therefore I came here. Saw you made a few changes and put away your pic. Then I was surprised that just two songs of yours are available (fortunately I have the rest stored in my PC). As I'm writing this comment, I'm having Alphabet played. I can hear you made some significat changes to the sound of the song and you also prolly re-rapped it, didn't you? I must say the sound is much clearer now than in the previous version. Besides, your voice sounds more mature and stronger - I can feel you are a bit different inside than you were when you rapped the song for the first time. I also like the chorus, you have got nice voice when you are singing, it is clear and tender.
As for Devil on My Bed, I like better sound of the music, the voice change you made is...dunno...can't get used to it. To be honest, I liked the voice in the previous v
adrianothamc
Jul 13, 2007
Hi, I`m a Rapper & make a mixtape. I like your Style, your Beatz are very TIGHT! Please contact me at (mcadriano@okay.ms)
I pay also for Beatz, Peace!
em4life
Jun 19, 2007
"Suicide Note" is freezing. And when you lisson to it not just like it's only a song, but that it's represented by feelings then you get goose-flesh.
trurevolutionary
Mar 08, 2007
like what your doin over here stop by
Iphorill
Feb 03, 2007
thanx guys...I really appreciate it.
yo, Suzie...I didn't know you signed up in here!!! welcome.
IntaFlex
Jan 31, 2007
Kid's a genius.
Thanks my friend...