This one's better but still to much of the piano over and over like when the bass drops don't do the repetitive piano or whatever you start the beat off with
This one's also repetitive like you need a better bass drop and not so much piano over and over but it's ok too like I said we both are learning and I only wanna help you grow better with me so we can do this together so it's constructive feedback there not bad
This beat hit me hard ... collab ? hit me on IG : beatsinabag