GDramma
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LifeAroundCreativity
Mar 07, 2008
yo, what's good son.
leaving you some feedback on ya shit.
your delivery and the way you sound on the tracks are straight.
it's just your flow and lyrics need some work.
try adding/subtracting words in your lines so it could flow on point and finish on point feel me.
your lyrics, i can't assume anything about what's real and what's not, but just be real in your sh*** aight.
like, you talk about guns and shit, if you have personal experience about that then that's all you, that's cool.
but don't front about sh*** that ain't true, you feel me.
that's all i gotta say, just keep at it. stay focused.
stay up son.
Waddup D? I finaly listened to some of your tracks & I like ALOT ! You have talent boi :) & good to hear your out of house arrest tomorrow !! Ttul D ox