It would be nice to jam with other folks from New Jersey
I hope you don't mind my reactions to your pieces
1. April
...beautiful piano & melody !, love everything but the flute, wish the flute could be mellowed
....as the flute is at the end, and have another strings sound accompany the flute part
2. A 3 minute egg
...sounds nicely symbolize the cracking of an egg !, I'd dullen the cracking sound a bit
...maybe a Film/Tv place needs a piece realted to -the cracking of an agg ! (not trying to be facious)
3. This can't be love
....stars with this beautiful tight ryhthmn , I'd just make the vocal more echoey
4.On the web
...maybe music for a horror movie
5. An august evening
...photo beautifully blends wit guitar, guitar could be crisper and more articulate
...(a problem of mine w/ my piano playing)
..............
overall-- deep, dark & meaningful , its nice to find such a pearl
I hope at some point you get to listen to some of my tunes,
peace !
writerandkey
It would be nice to jam with other folks from New Jersey I hope you don't mind my reactions to your pieces 1. April ...beautiful piano & melody !, love everything but the flute, wish the flute could be mellowed ....as the flute is at the end, and have another strings sound accompany the flute part 2. A 3 minute egg ...sounds nicely symbolize the cracking of an egg !, I'd dullen the cracking sound a bit ...maybe a Film/Tv place needs a piece realted to -the cracking of an agg ! (not trying to be facious) 3. This can't be love ....stars with this beautiful tight ryhthmn , I'd just make the vocal more echoey 4.On the web ...maybe music for a horror movie 5. An august evening ...photo beautifully blends wit guitar, guitar could be crisper and more articulate ...(a problem of mine w/ my piano playing) .............. overall-- deep, dark & meaningful , its nice to find such a pearl I hope at some point you get to listen to some of my tunes, peace ! writerandkey